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You are Mine by smilingDOGZ You are Mine by smilingDOGZ
I think I've been reading too much Sunstone lately..... NAH!

If you don't know what that is here is a Link. A little warning  though if your not into BDSM or any mature stuff do not proceed.
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missing-shadow Featured By Owner 6 days ago   Writer
Holy, and excuse my language, shit, do you know how long i've been trying to find this specific comic?
I found it years ago, i forgot the name and couldn't find it, i had completely given up and forgot what it was, until i clicked the link. Holy shit, thank you.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Direct, commanding girls. I like this. :-)
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EonOrteaShadowmaster Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Sunstone, eh?  I thought I recognized Shiniez's style here.
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ThatBronyWithGlasses Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Writer
Damnit, nothing is safe from R34. 

Seriously. Nothing is totally safe from it. Because if you do something with it, it becomes something.
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Warmandude7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
This isn't really R34, since that means "Porn of everything". This isn't porn at all.
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ThatBronyWithGlasses Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
If things kept progressing... you get the idea, it is more about what is implied
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pendrake47 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014


1. Some canon information to clear up the "ages & relations" commentary (&/or confusion)...  ;)


 ~ a. Spike was hatched by Twilight Sparkle's powerful magics, but it was Princess Celestia that raised Spike until he was of age & growth enough to assist Twilight Sparkle in her studies & duties.


 ~ b. Princess Celestia assigned Spike to be Twilight Sparkle's assistant once he was old & able enough to begin doing such duties.  Conversely, Princess Celestia charged Twilight Sparkle to be Spike's caretaker (note: not "parent" or "sibling").


 ~ c. While the ages of the primary pony cast are deliberately left "imprecise" (though Lauren Faust envisioned them between "12 to 17"), there is a generalized age-&-maturity range for them.

  • Applejack & Rarity are the "eldest." (note "quotations")
  • Fluttershy & Rainbow Dash are the same age in the "middle."
  • Pinkie Pie & Twilight Sparkle are the "youngest" among the circle of friends.  Twilight being more "mature" in attitude because of her prodigy nature and role as leader of the Elements of Harmony.  {Which now also includes being an alicorn princess too, I suppose.}
  • Spike & Twilight Sparkle are "close" in age-per-year because Twilight applied to Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns at a very early (filly-)age at the time when she magically hatched Spike.


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Dogz777 ...


2. Art-wise, you have markedly improved upon portraying Spike.


 ~ a. The thick locks and "soft" forward-mohawk are definitely a vast improvement over the previous version of the backwards-mohawk and buzz-cut.  Likewise, the dark-green & light-green of previous hair clashed, the current all green is much more visually acceptable to the eyes.


 ~ b. Clothing, with its canon coloring to baby-dragon Spike, are much improved as well.  Keeping the pants a neutral color (such as dark blue or black) is probably the better choice over trying to color them green & purple


 ~ c. Human-Spike's lanky, but still fit, figure is also a good artistic call, since Spike can get his "beefcake" via his dragon-form.  Lanky is good, you do not want "thin," however.  Spike should also be significantly stronger than he appears to be, even in human form.  Just as we see baby-dragon Spike being able to lift-&-carry masses & weights far in excess to his size, this should be reflected in your human-form Spike as well as dragon-form.  An example between the two would be human-Spike being able to lift a toppled oak dresser off of Rarity single-handedly, where-as dragon-Spike would shield Twilight Sparkle from a burning & collapsing building and then dig them both out from under all the wreckage.



3. A minor artistic detail refinement...  It took me a few visual passes to figure out that Twilight had used her magic to lock the door.  While the purple "Chck" is a good detail in matching Twilight's magic-use, I might suggest adding a small glow or spark emanating from the keyhole as well to reinforce that it has been magically locked.  Otherwise, it is a very good artistic call on keeping the colors oriented to their appropriate character, it gives clear visual direction to the audience.


4. From a storytelling perspective, it is a good idea to include both the Twilight Sparkle & Spike 'ship as well as the Spike & Rarity 'ship {portmanteau'x make my eyes twitch}.  One of the most iconic storytelling tools is the Love Triangle.


5. As a creative suggestion...  If you really want to add some story-twist and drama in the Romance field of your (overall) story, you could use an additional Love Triangle which would (partly) overlap between the Twilight-Spike-Rarity triangle.  This would be adding the also-popular Applejack & Rarity 'ship.  With an Applejack-Rarity-Spike Love Triangle, this gives Rarity her own personal character drama & screen time as well.

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PurpleSquidz Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
If you payed attention, I believe Pinkie Pie is actually one of the older characters,and spike is a baby, as Twlight said.
Re-watch it x3
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Path0of0cloud Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
When you live to the point that a 100 yr nap is normal, baby is a pretty relative term. Especially since Magic Kindergarten is when Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns starts.
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pendrake47 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014

If you want to get canon-technical, Pinkie Pie is referred as being younger than her fellow Elements, most specifically Fluttershy (Fluttershy is +1 year older than Pinkie Pie).  Likewise, Applejack and Rarity have referred to Pinkie Pie as a younger ("kiddo", "young lady").  But as I said, the specific numeric ages are deliberately left "imprecise" by the MLP:FiM production crews and writing teams.

As for Spike, Twilight refers to him being a baby in terms of dragon maturity, but he is (obviously) far more in maturity compared to ponies to his numeric age.  Thus why I specifically said Spike and Twilight are "close" (the word used by Lauren Faust, not me) in terms of age-per-year, numerically speaking, not by maturity or by racial difference.  However, Spike is indeed the very youngest (again, age-per-year) among the primary cast.

The canon information I posted is from the canon wikia's, the comic books, and Tweet references by Lauren Faust, Meghan McCarthy, and others of the MLP:FiM writers.

So "yes, I paid attention."  ;)

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