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I think I've been reading too much Sunstone lately..... NAH!

If you don't know what that is here is a Link. A little warning  though if your not into BDSM or any mature stuff do not proceed.
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Deadman1230 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
Where's the rape whistle when you need it?
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SapphireLibra3 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Professional Writer
Spike, she's fallen prey to dark magic!  Run away!  RUN AWAY!!!!
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mortalshinobi Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
domineering twi? heh, i like
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Vadamus Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I KNEW THERE WAS SOME RELATION! The art style is pretty close to Sunstone's! Well done :)
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missing-shadow Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014   Writer
Holy, and excuse my language, shit, do you know how long i've been trying to find this specific comic?
I found it years ago, i forgot the name and couldn't find it, i had completely given up and forgot what it was, until i clicked the link. Holy shit, thank you.
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ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
Direct, commanding girls. I like this. :-)
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EonOrteaShadowmaster Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Sunstone, eh?  I thought I recognized Shiniez's style here.
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Popculture-Patron Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Writer
Damnit, nothing is safe from R34. 

Seriously. Nothing is totally safe from it. Because if you do something with it, it becomes something.
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Warmandude7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
This isn't really R34, since that means "Porn of everything". This isn't porn at all.
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Popculture-Patron Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Writer
If things kept progressing... you get the idea, it is more about what is implied
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pendrake47 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014


1. Some canon information to clear up the "ages & relations" commentary (&/or confusion)...  ;)


 ~ a. Spike was hatched by Twilight Sparkle's powerful magics, but it was Princess Celestia that raised Spike until he was of age & growth enough to assist Twilight Sparkle in her studies & duties.


 ~ b. Princess Celestia assigned Spike to be Twilight Sparkle's assistant once he was old & able enough to begin doing such duties.  Conversely, Princess Celestia charged Twilight Sparkle to be Spike's caretaker (note: not "parent" or "sibling").


 ~ c. While the ages of the primary pony cast are deliberately left "imprecise" (though Lauren Faust envisioned them between "12 to 17"), there is a generalized age-&-maturity range for them.

  • Applejack & Rarity are the "eldest." (note "quotations")
  • Fluttershy & Rainbow Dash are the same age in the "middle."
  • Pinkie Pie & Twilight Sparkle are the "youngest" among the circle of friends.  Twilight being more "mature" in attitude because of her prodigy nature and role as leader of the Elements of Harmony.  {Which now also includes being an alicorn princess too, I suppose.}
  • Spike & Twilight Sparkle are "close" in age-per-year because Twilight applied to Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns at a very early (filly-)age at the time when she magically hatched Spike.


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Dogz777 ...


2. Art-wise, you have markedly improved upon portraying Spike.


 ~ a. The thick locks and "soft" forward-mohawk are definitely a vast improvement over the previous version of the backwards-mohawk and buzz-cut.  Likewise, the dark-green & light-green of previous hair clashed, the current all green is much more visually acceptable to the eyes.


 ~ b. Clothing, with its canon coloring to baby-dragon Spike, are much improved as well.  Keeping the pants a neutral color (such as dark blue or black) is probably the better choice over trying to color them green & purple


 ~ c. Human-Spike's lanky, but still fit, figure is also a good artistic call, since Spike can get his "beefcake" via his dragon-form.  Lanky is good, you do not want "thin," however.  Spike should also be significantly stronger than he appears to be, even in human form.  Just as we see baby-dragon Spike being able to lift-&-carry masses & weights far in excess to his size, this should be reflected in your human-form Spike as well as dragon-form.  An example between the two would be human-Spike being able to lift a toppled oak dresser off of Rarity single-handedly, where-as dragon-Spike would shield Twilight Sparkle from a burning & collapsing building and then dig them both out from under all the wreckage.



3. A minor artistic detail refinement...  It took me a few visual passes to figure out that Twilight had used her magic to lock the door.  While the purple "Chck" is a good detail in matching Twilight's magic-use, I might suggest adding a small glow or spark emanating from the keyhole as well to reinforce that it has been magically locked.  Otherwise, it is a very good artistic call on keeping the colors oriented to their appropriate character, it gives clear visual direction to the audience.


4. From a storytelling perspective, it is a good idea to include both the Twilight Sparkle & Spike 'ship as well as the Spike & Rarity 'ship {portmanteau'x make my eyes twitch}.  One of the most iconic storytelling tools is the Love Triangle.


5. As a creative suggestion...  If you really want to add some story-twist and drama in the Romance field of your (overall) story, you could use an additional Love Triangle which would (partly) overlap between the Twilight-Spike-Rarity triangle.  This would be adding the also-popular Applejack & Rarity 'ship.  With an Applejack-Rarity-Spike Love Triangle, this gives Rarity her own personal character drama & screen time as well.

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PurpleSquidz Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
If you payed attention, I believe Pinkie Pie is actually one of the older characters,and spike is a baby, as Twlight said.
Re-watch it x3
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Path0of0cloud Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
When you live to the point that a 100 yr nap is normal, baby is a pretty relative term. Especially since Magic Kindergarten is when Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns starts.
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pendrake47 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014

If you want to get canon-technical, Pinkie Pie is referred as being younger than her fellow Elements, most specifically Fluttershy (Fluttershy is +1 year older than Pinkie Pie).  Likewise, Applejack and Rarity have referred to Pinkie Pie as a younger ("kiddo", "young lady").  But as I said, the specific numeric ages are deliberately left "imprecise" by the MLP:FiM production crews and writing teams.

As for Spike, Twilight refers to him being a baby in terms of dragon maturity, but he is (obviously) far more in maturity compared to ponies to his numeric age.  Thus why I specifically said Spike and Twilight are "close" (the word used by Lauren Faust, not me) in terms of age-per-year, numerically speaking, not by maturity or by racial difference.  However, Spike is indeed the very youngest (again, age-per-year) among the primary cast.

The canon information I posted is from the canon wikia's, the comic books, and Tweet references by Lauren Faust, Meghan McCarthy, and others of the MLP:FiM writers.

So "yes, I paid attention."  ;)

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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Or Twidash. You know, Dash with Twi. The beloved hero of the masses, bathing in the lights of praise and glory, and the feared/hated anti-hero of the shadows, walking alone and fighting alone. If it weren't for Dash later in the story that is. ;P
That and Twidash is as if not more popular than Rarijack so that is a fair idea as well to consider if Dogz want to think about an additional love triangle. That is if Spike will even be in love with Rarity. I would like to read some comics where he isn't a puppy in love with Rare... <.<
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pendrake47 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014

Actually...  I specifically avoided the Twilight Sparkle & Rainbow Dash 'ship for creative suggestion, for two (2) reasons:

 - 1st: Dogz777 already has the Love Triangle intended with involving Twilight->Spike<-Rarity.

 - 2nd: To use characters besides Twilight Sparkle.


My creative suggestion for an add-on of the Applejack->Rarity<-Spike Love Triangle gives those characters their own separate screen time and drama.  Good storytelling with a multiple primary cast means taking care not to overly center around one specific character.


But if you want to get into brony-dom demographics ;) , the popular Romantic categories & 'ships are...

 - 1st: "The One who was Always There" Romance ~ Fluttershy & Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle & Spike; Generally speaking for the category itself, it is hard not to love this particular theme of Romance.

 - 2nd: "Opposites Attract" Romance ~ Rarity & Applejack, Twilight Sparkle & Rainbow Dash

 - 3rd: "Love at First Sight" Romance ~ Spike & Rarity


Personally, I try to avoid getting too involved with 'shipping, despite my love of a good Romance (pun intended).  But with brony-dom, that is like trying to avoid fish in the oceans.  :D

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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Actually given what he wrote in this comment:
"Somewhat, this is just me experimenting on scenes. They will certainly have some sort of relationship but not like this."

There might be no Twi->Spike<-Rarity love Triangle so a RD->Twi<-Flash Sentry/somebody else, could be possible though I would keep it to RD<->Twi though in an uncertain way since both stands on different sides but are fighting for a similar cause (justice in this case) while keeping the love triangle to AJ, Spike and Rarity. And that triangle would in my book end with Applespike.^^

Yeah, shipping is pretty much one of the several pillars bronydom stands on. 90% Lesbian shipping that is. XD
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Master7761 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Awesome. I love Spike and Twilight shipping, awesome work man.
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mexicangirl12 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
stupid Spike you should enjoy it
hehehe ok no
but I really love this pairing
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1stSuperboyFan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
The Great Mage and the Dragon Knight a great team and couple. So is this the canon for the comic?
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smilingDOGZ Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Somewhat, this is just me experimenting on scenes. They will certainly have some sort of relationship but not like this.
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1stSuperboyFan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
AWAWA. And I found this so cute. It was like Beast Boy x Raven.
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Yeah, but this means Twidash miiiiiight have a chance to become drawn in the comics and that would be kind of like Robin x Raven which is also pretty darn cool, if you ask me. :3
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1stSuperboyFan Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
This is were idealizes have little conflict. First not into many mare x mare ships, I'm not against them I'm just don't get them I'm more Stallion x mare person and some colt cuddling. Also never saw Robin x Raven I shipped Beast Boy and Raven from the start, I always saw Robin and Raven as kinder-ad souls the under stood each other sorta a cross between comrades in arms/ brother and sister. Also I was always torn between Dick x Babs and Starfire x Robin. 
Also were do you see Robin in RD I just see Flash aka Wally in her. And in Their relationship is see more of Batman and Superman team. 
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Robin in RD = HUGE Justice sense, depends on technolgy and martial arts than magic
Raven in Twi = Mystery, rare kind of a magical race, well read, etc

There can always be something interpretated into their personalities to fit another one. I always shipped Robin with Raven, dunno, but in the Titan series those two had a great chemistry which I could see become a base for a future relationship. In fanfics mostly ofc.^^
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1stSuperboyFan Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Sorry about the RD isn't Robin thing. I asked DOGZ and he said they have no powers with out the suit so more Iron Man but I'll say robin for the heck of it. The bats do were power suits a lot.

What does ofc mean?

And I get for those who see the relationship with the chemistry they have on the show but I do see the chemistry the Raven and BB had on the show too. Also again they were a couple in the comics too.
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
ofc = of cource ^^
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superlightsaber Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
This pairing rules!
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keroroforever623 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
So does this scene have any canon in your story or did you made this for fun?
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smilingDOGZ Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Somewhat, this is just a mock-up of what will eventually happen.
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keroroforever623 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Eventually happen! I think I might like this comic.
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Smurf666 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
TwiSpike = the best ship to ever sail
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superlightsaber Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
Agreed.
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alquimistafriki Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Raper time?
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musicman722 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
aww no sparity?
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smilingDOGZ Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There will.
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
Awwww, and here I hoped for some rarer kind of Spike ship than his first crush/ 0815 puppy love one. D:
And here you could have even avoided the "incest" fears given those two aren't related and never meet each other till they're young adults in the story. :c
Well, maybe Rarity won't be into Spike. After all, from my understanding of MLP Rarity, she knows of Spike's crush but she doesn't love him back the same way he does towards her, which is why she prevented him to confess that one time to not break his heart (yet). Maybe she hopes he will outgrow of it or that he will give up on her when she enters a relationship with some stallion she loves/fancies. Like that Trenderhoof guy she wants to get together with in that future episode of hers, another sign to me that Rare's not into Spike depsite what many Sparity shippers claim to be canon in the show.^^;
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musicman722 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
good. don't disappoint
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DragoLord19D Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Spike RUN! THATS NOT TWI! YOU KNOW AS WELL AS EVERYONE(except for them) THAT TWI AND DASH HAS THE HOTS FOR EACH OTHER!
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Harem ending?
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DragoLord19D Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You mean, the super-secret ending?
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Nah, it's probably an changeling or Chryslais messing with or trying to capture him via his crush on the hot librarian... 
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DNFTT2014 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Twilight is drunk again?
Spike needs to remember how deadly Rarity can be if she is crossed.
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Pizor Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I endlessly entertained by Spike's comical terrified expression XP
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Huminahuminahuminahuminahumina~
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littlequeen456 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ummm, isnt she like a motherly figure to him?
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Not in this world, she isn't.

In this world she never meet SPike till she was an adult, same for him. Nor did she hatched him as he was born a normal human within a normal family. Nor did she raised him/was his guardian due the reason mentioned before.
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littlequeen456 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm, okay then, that makes sense...
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nightshade1218 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Your point?
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lastlasagna Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Run, Spike, run! She may seem tempting, but all she's going to do is make you into her slave/indentured servant!
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JamesRye Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Who says Spike's not into that? Remember how much he loves to be a slave to Rarity in the show? XDDD
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