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To Serve and Protect by smilingDOGZ To Serve and Protect by smilingDOGZ
My comic has been sad as of late, so here's something to look forward to.

Celestia and Sunset are normal humans.
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allyvania88 Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i just knew that sunset could be celestia's daughter in something like this
Saro0fD3monz Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
where can I read the comic?!?!?!
Two things I just have to ask 1 if Celestia is a cop and Discord is a scientist who is running the country and 2 where is Luna
smilingDOGZ Apr 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Both of them used too rule, now only Luna runs the country.
MagicaITrevor Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lel. I need to find this comic of yours, unless I'm already reading it. XD

Dogz777 ...

1. An interesting angle for having Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle as adoptive sisters.  A potentially interesting twist would be to NOT villainize Sunset Shimmer as with MLP:EqG, since you have a (mostly) open canvas to work with.

2. I do have a thought of contention with your Alternate Universe (AU) Princess Celestia, though...

You seem to have a lot of other characters that are higher-ranked than a Police Commissioner, notably your Vanguards (your version of S.H.I.E.L.D?).  This could wind up (negatively) overshadowing the character & theme of your AU Celestia.  Princess Celestia should be a high-ranked character, albeit in a supporting role.  Fortunately, there is a viable alternative...

Princess Celestia as an Admiral.

Why an admiral?  Two reasons:

  • 1st - This keeps Celestia highly ranked, both militarily and politically.  Even if she does not use it, it gives the reader audience a more relatable and canon-esque feel of the character's authority and rank.

  • 2nd - The uniform for an admiral?   White cloth with gold trim & epaulets.  Thus the audience would have a close visual image to relate the alicorn Princess Celestia.

This line of thought is based upon the trying to keep things close to your MLP:FIM source materiel, and in trying to tell a reader-believable story.  It is far too easy to drift too far out, and as a result lose your readers.  {Source Accuracy...always, always Source Accuracy at the forefront of any fan-artists' mind.}

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3. As an aside, if you still need someone to dress in the dark-blue colors of the Canterlot Police Department, there does happen to be a family relation to Princess Celestia who could also fill that role.  One that happens to favors the colors of dark blue and silver within canon...  ;)

L-MASTER Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
great! Q.Q
Twilight is so cute in this!
Redtriangle Dec 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love the idea that Twilight and Sunset are sisters, I can't remember anyone do that. Not only they are equal in magic skills but they should treat each other like equals as well rather than fighting each other.
Praise the Sun!
If the teaser comic wasn't enough, all this awesome promo art keeps getting pumped out.
The artist was clearly the conductor of the Hype Train at some point in his life.
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