Seriously, the Canterlot police must be terrible... There's is no other way to explain why the police haven't shown up after at least 7 minutes of gun shots and screaming. I'm waiting for the swat to come in and shot her down in a hail of bullets... She needs to die!
Why is NOBODy or at leas the police coming? There had been shots and shouts and kills for several minutes and there's still no special forces rushing through the windows to save Twily? What the hell, man, what the hell? D:
But boy, such a shot will leave a nasty scar though it might look pretty cool when Twily becomes a woman. IF Twily gets older that is... <.<
calm down everyone, does every story have to have a good ending? i don't exactly like how this story is turning out either but the way this story unfolds is up to the artist alone. but do carry on with the current plot Dogz777.
Holy shit Dogz, i don't know if you realized this when you made this, but now there is an angry mod of furious bronies that want that bich's head. I include myself in said mob, but I prefer actions instead of words *Loads a M-60 with anti-tank ammo*